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Angela things are looking good on your blog, well done. You must get the following done however;

complete any unfinished postings
embed some of your video links properly - some just appear as code
some video analysis using the Goodwin theory framework
keep up with reflections on the group project and how things are going from your perspective
also you need a list with some links to good music video/music industry related sites that you have found useful

that would be good for now

Ms B

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Your research is taking a really interesting direction Angela, well done. Plenty of prgress demonstrated.

(Cracking exam results btw!!)

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Excellent postings Angela, demonstrating extremely thoughtful research and ideas development. Well done. Keep posting regularly though; it's important to avoid long gaps between posts

Reactions to group feedback/presentation of treatment

Problems I think were highlighted in the feedback we received following our presentation of our treatment were:

• The band members will be incongruous as a group; their individual ecclectic dress sense, it was said, would make it difficult to comprehend them really being a solid band or even being friends.
• The band have already recently made a video for the song.
• Apparently this video is somewhat similar to our idea.
• Logistically, some of the scenes would just be very difficult to do.

I therefore think that a completely different idea could be beneficial to us.

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good work angela, I like your ideas posts, and great album cover work. how about some further music video analysis - do a few videos that have really inspired you using the framework we used in class. I can see you've already thought about this!

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angela there should be evidence of research and track selection by now, start posting asap so you don't get behind :-)